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2. The grammar and spelling in your essay are correct.

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4. Your revisions have improved the flow and clarity of the text.

5. The topic of your essay is well-developed and well-supported.

6. Your essay has a clear thesis statement and good evidence.

7. Your grammar and syntax are perfect for a high school essay.

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9. Your language choice and use are appropriate for the topic.

10. Your essay shows a good understanding of the assignment and its requirements.

11. Your revised essay is more engaging and well-researched.

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27. Your grammar and syntax are perfect for a high school essay.

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29. Your essay has a clear thesis statement and supporting evidence.

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38. Your essay has a clear thesis statement and supporting evidence.

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41. Your grammar and spelling are perfect for a high school essay.

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